Here you go!
I appreciate your submission to Newgrounds! However, I must say 3 things about this flash.
-Pointless.
-No plot.
-Decent graphics.
Graphics - I appreciate your attempt at graphics. Those are the graphics I like, simple, but not stick figures. *Twitch* I hate stick figures some times... ANYWAYS! There isn't much to tell you about your graphics except to try and make different copies, making it 3d, and make some other backgrounds rather than flying stars(?).
Style - I loved your ingenuity! An axe attempting to chop a line that gets away! (and then turns into a sword) The only thing that I think that took away 2 'points' was the random ship blasting them both. Try to stick to a plot.
Sound - Good song, but that was it. Try to input sounds according to the actions... unless I didn't hear them. I can't remember. ><
Violence - I judge normally on three things:
-Blood & Gore
-Fluidity of movement
-Frame Rate
You had the PERFECT frame rate. You did good. But make the violence longer!
Interactivity - You had a play button. Good job. However, I can only give you a 1. This isn't a game. Sorry! ( It isn't personal, buddy. )
Humour - Not much humour, except the ship who blasted everything. Pwn3d...
Overall - 5 on the 1/10 scale.
TOTAL - 24/ 60. 40%
UNDER AVERAGE
Good try! Make it longer, ALOT longer, and keep up the good work!